Assessment Standards for essays, papers, reviews, reports
and other formal writing*

Always proof read and edit as necessary (several times) before submitting your work.

Grades for each criteria will be averaged to get the grade for the paper as a whole.

Criteria

A
Contains that WOW! factor
B
OK but lacks that "WOW!" factor
C
Fair effort but contains problems
D
Poor, contains many problems
F
Thesis Easily identifiable, plausible, novel, sophisticated, insightful, crystal clear. Promising, but may be slightly unclear, or lacking in insight or originality. May be unclear (containing many vague terms), appear unoriginal, or offer relatively little that is new; provides little around which to structure the paper. Difficult to identify at all, may be a bland restatement of an obvious point. Clear lack of effort and/or paper may be too short of required word count. Paper may also be too far off task to even begin to fulfill assignment.

However, minimum of half credit simply for trying.

Revision may be possible if submitted on time.

Structure Evident, understandable, appropriate for thesis. Excellent transitions from point to point. Paragraphs support solid topic sentences. Generally clear and appropriate, though may wander occasionally. May have a few unclear transitions, or a few paragraphs without strong topic sentences. Generally unclear, often wanders or jumps around. Few or weak transitions, many paragraphs have weak or no topic sentences. Unclear, often because thesis is weak or non-existent. Transitions confusion and unclear. Few topic sentences.
Use of Evidence Primary source information used to buttress every point with at least one example. Examples support topic sentence and fit within paragraph. Excellent integration of quoted material into sentences. Examples used to support most points. Some evidence does not support point, or may appear where inappropriate. Quotes well integrated into sentences. Examples used to support some points. Points often lack supporting evidence, or evidence used where inappropriate (often because there may be no clear point). Quotes may be poorly integrated into sentences. Very few or very weak examples. General failure to support statements, or evidence seems to support no statement. Quotes not integrated into sentences ("plopped in" in improper manner).
Analysis Author clearly related evidence to topic sentence; analysis is fresh and exciting, posing new ways to think of the material. Evidence often related to topic sentence, though links perhaps not very clear. Quotes appear often without analysis relating to topic sentence (or there is a weak topic sentence to support), or analysis offers nothing beyond the quote. Very little or very weak attempt to relate evidence to argument; may be no identifiable argument, or no evidence to relate it to.
Logic & Argumentation All ideas in the paper flow logically; the argument is identifiable, reasonable, and sound. Author anticipates and successfully defuses counter- arguments; makes novel connections to outside material (from other parts of the class, or other classes) which illuminate thesis. Argument of paper is clear, usually flows logically and makes sense. Some evidence that counter- arguments acknowledged, though perhaps not addressed. Occasional insightful connections are made to outside material. Logic may often fail, or argument may often be unclear. May not address counter- arguments or make any outside connections. Ideas do not flow at all, usually because there is no argument to support. Simplistic view of topic; no effort to grasp possible alternative views.
Mechanics Sentence structure, grammar, and diction (word choice) are excellent and sophisticated; correct use of punctuation and citation style; minimal to no spelling errors; no run-on sentences or comma splices. Sentence structure, grammar, and diction are strong despite occasional lapses; punctuation and citation style often used correctly. Some (minor) spelling errors; may have one run-on sentence or comma splice. Problems in sentence structure, grammar, and/or diction (usually not major). Errors in punctuation, citation style, and spelling. May have several run-on sentences or comma splices. Big problems in sentence structure, grammar, and/or diction. Frequent major errors in citation style, punctuation, and spelling. May have many run-on sentences and comma splices.

Students for whom English is a second language will not be given a handicap. If you are writing in English you are expected to write well, just as you would if writing a report for your place of business. 

If you feel you need help with your writing skills, take your paper to the Writing Center on campus before you submit it. Have them go through it with you to point out areas that need some work. The tutor can work with you to help you with mechanics as well as other aspects of good writing. 


Adapted from Paul Halsall/Fordham University

Created by Laura Ellen Shulman 

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Last updated: February 28, 2009