|
A (superior) |
B (Good) |
C (Fair) |
D (Poor) |
Thesis |
easily identifiable,
plausible, novel, sophisticated, insightful, crystal clear |
promising, but may be
slightly unclear or lacking in insight or originality |
may be unclear (containing
vague terms), appear unoriginal or offer relatively little that is
new; provides little around which to structure a paper |
Difficult to identify at
all; may be bland restatement of an obvious point |
Structure |
evident, understandable,
appropriate for thesis; excellent transitions from point to point;
paragraphs support solid topic sentences |
generally clear and
appropriate though may wander occasionally; may have a few unclear
transitions, or a few paragraphs without strong topic sentences |
generally unclear, often
wanders or jumps around; few or weak transitions; many paragraphs
without topic sentences |
unclear, often because
thesis is weak or non-existent; transitions confusing and unclear;
few topic sentences |
Use of evidence |
primary source information
used to buttress every point with at least one example; examples
support mini-thesis (topic sentence) and fit within paragraph;
excellent integration of quoted material into sentences; proper
citation given within paper and a "works cited" page |
examples used to support
most points; some evidence does not support point or may appear
where inappropriate; quotes fairly well integrated into sentences;
citation mostly proper but may be insufficient or missing in some
places where needed |
examples used to support
some points; points often lack supporting evidence, or evidence used
where inappropriate (often because there may be no clear point);
quotes may be poorly integrated into sentences; most citations
missing or insufficient (where needed) |
very few or very weak
examples; general failure to support statements, or evidence seems
to support no statement; quotes not integrated into sentences (just
"plopped in" in an inappropriate manner); no citations or
"works cited" page (where needed) |
Analysis |
author clearly relates
evidence to "mini-thesis"; analysis is fresh and exciting,
posing new ways to think about the material |
evidence often related to
mini-thesis though links perhaps not very clear |
quotes appear often
without analysis relating them to mini-thesis (or there is a weak
mini-thesis to support); or analysis offers nothing beyond the quote |
very little or very weak
attempt to relate evidence to argument; may be no identifiable
argument, or no evidence to relate it to |
Logic and
Argumentation |
all ideas in the paper
flow logically; the argument is identifiable, reasonable and sound;
author anticipates and successfully defuses counter-arguments; makes
novel connections to outside material (from other parts of the class
or other classes) which illuminate thesis |
argument of paper is
clear, usually flows logically and makes sense; some evidence that
counter-arguments are acknowledged, though perhaps not addressed;
occasional insightful connections to outside material made |
logic may often fail, or
argument may often be unclear; may not address counter-arguments or
make any outside connections |
ideas do not flow at all,
usually because there is no argument to support; simplistic view of
topic, no effort to grasp possible alternative views |
Mechanics |
sentence structure,
grammar, and diction (vocabulary) excellent; correct use of
punctuation and citation style; minimal to no spelling errors;
absolutely no run-on sentences, comma splices or sentence fragments |
sentence structure,
grammar, and diction strong despite occasional lapses; punctuation
and citation style often used correctly; some (minor) spelling
errors; may have one run-on sentence, comma splice or sentence
fragment |
problems in sentence
structure, grammar, and diction (usually not major); errors in
punctuation, citation style and/or spelling; may have several run-on
sentences, comma splices or sentence fragments |
big problems in sentence
structure, grammar and diction; frequent major errors in citation
style, punctuation and spelling; may have many run-on sentences,
comma splices and/or sentence fragments |